ubuntu: add reviews from Ketal

Signed-off-by: Nicolas Dechesne <nicolas.dechesne@linaro.org>

1 files changed, 13 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/ubuntu/boards/snapdragon/README.textile.in b/ubuntu/boards/snapdragon/README.textile.in
index 3df328f..0e94e4e 100644
--- a/ubuntu/boards/snapdragon/README.textile.in
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@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-The Linaro Qualcomm Landing Team is pleased to announce the new release of the _Snapdragon 600 Linux Platform_. The  _Snapdragon 600 Linux Platform_ ##RELEASE## release is an Ubuntu-based Linaro Member Build that provides developers with a _desktop like_ environment using Ubuntu and the Gnome desktop, as well as a console-only image.
+The Linaro Qualcomm Landing Team is pleased to announce the new release of the _Linaro Linux release for Qualcomm(tm) Snapdragon(R) 600 processor_. The Linaro Linux release ##RELEASE## is an Ubuntu-based Linaro Member Build that provides developers with a _desktop like_ environment using Ubuntu and the Gnome desktop, as well as a console-only image.
 
 h4. What's new in this release
 
@@ -10,14 +10,14 @@ h4. What's new in this release
 * Bug fixed:
 ** N/A
 
-This is the first release of a new series for the Snapdragon 600 Linux Platform. Going forward, the Linaro member monthly builds for Snapdragon 600 will be providing a kernel based on the most recent Linux kernel ("www.kernel.org":https://www.kernel.org) available at the time of the release. The goals of the Linaro Release are to align with the latest Linux Kernel, close the gaps in features provided and migrate from the existing 3.4 vendor kernel. One immediate consequence of this migration is that some regressions are expected. Current regressions include: lack of audio support, video hardware acceleration, bluetooth and support for running CPU beyond 1Ghz.
+This is the first release of a new series for the Linaro Linux release for Snapdragon 600 processor. Going forward, the Linaro member monthly builds for Snapdragon 600 processor will be providing a kernel based on the current Linux kernel ("www.kernel.org":https://www.kernel.org) available at the time of the release. The goals of the Linaro Linux releases for Snapdragon 600 processor are to align with the latest Linux Kernel, close the gaps in features provided and migrate from the existing 3.4 vendor kernel. One immediate consequence of this migration is that some regressions are expected. Current regressions include: lack of audio support, video hardware acceleration, bluetooth and support for running CPU beyond 1Ghz. Developers can continue to use the "Linaro Linux release 14.10 for Snapdragon 600 processor":http://releases.linaro.org/14.10/ubuntu/ifc6410/, which is based on Linux kernel v3.4 and Ubuntu 14.04 if needed.
 
 h4. Features
 
-The following features are currently supported by the ##RELEASE## version of the Snapdragon 600 Linux Platform:
+The Linaro Linux version ##RELEASE## for the Snapdragon 600 supports the following features:
 
 * Provides a working Ubuntu environment with access to Ubuntu repositories (apt-get) and updates. It is based on Ubuntu ##UBUNTU_REL## (aka ##UBUNTU_REL_NICK##).
-* It is based proprietary firmware from ##INFORCE_VERSION##.
+* It is based on proprietary firmware from ##INFORCE_VERSION##.
 * The following prebuilt images are released:
 ** @boot@ image that includes prebuilt kernel and initrd
 ** @developer@ image that includes Ubuntu core packages as well as typical development packages
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ The following features are currently supported by the ##RELEASE## version of the
 * The root file system can be installed on eMMC or any other external media such as USB, SD card, SATA.
 * Android Debug Bridge (adb) can be used to connect to the target
 * Support for the following Snapdragon 600 based boards:
-** Inforce IFC6410 Rev P1 and A1, Inforce IFC6412
+** Inforce IFC6410 Rev P1 and A1
 ** Compulab CM-QS600
 * The following Snapdragon 600 features are supported:
 ** Quad Core Krait 300 CPU (up to 1GHz)
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ The following features are currently supported by the ##RELEASE## version of the
 
 h4. Information about the IFC6410 board
 
-For more information about Linaro's Snapdragon 600 Linux Platform Build and the Inforce IFC6410 board, please check the "Linaro wiki":https://wiki.linaro.org/Boards/IFC6410. This wiki page provides additional information on board setup and getting started with Ubuntu on the IFC6410 (e.g. customize the kernel, rebuild the images, ...).
+For more information about Linaro Linux release for Snapdragon 600 processor and the Inforce IFC6410 board, please check the "Linaro wiki":https://wiki.linaro.org/Boards/IFC6410. This wiki page provides additional information on board setup and getting started with Ubuntu on the IFC6410 (e.g. customize the kernel, rebuild the images, ...).
 
 h4. Information about the Compulab CM-QS600 Board
 
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ For more information about Compulab QS600 board, please check "Compulab website"
 
 h4. Download the release binaries
 
-To install this release on a Snapdragon S600 board, you need to download the following files:
+To install this release on a Snapdragon 600 based board, you need to download the following files:
 
 bc. firmware-qcom-snapdragon-##VERSION##.img.gz
 linaro-##UBUNTU_REL_NICK##-developer-qcom-snapdragon-##VERSION##.img.gz
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ h4. Known issues and limitations
 
 * Audio is currently not supported in this release.
 * Some recent IFC6410 or Compulab QS-600 boards come with more recent bootloaders pre flashed (e.g. the bootloaders from Inforce Android Kit Kat release), and display clocks cannot be enabled properly. See "this email":http://lists.freedesktop.org/archives/freedreno/2014-November/000135.html for more information. The solution is to downgrade the bootloader, as explained in the email above.
-* In the Gnome login manager, 2 fallback sessions are proposed: using Metacity or Compiz. Compiz is not working, and there is no plan to fix that, as Compiz is obsolete. Metacity is working fine, and provides an altertanive graphical interface that does not use GPU for composition.
+* In the Gnome login manager, 2 fallback sessions are proposed: using Metacity or Compiz. Compiz is not working, and there is no plan to fix that, as Compiz is obsolete. Metacity is working fine, and provides an alternative graphical interface that does not use GPU for composition.
 * Few software codecs are installed by default; you might install additional codecs such as  @gstreamer1.0-plugins-bad@ or @gstreamer1.0-plugins-ugly@.
 * Once you have flashed the boot partition with a valid boot image, the board will automatically boot that image when powered on. To avoid automatically booting you can jumper the board as explained in this "page":http://mydragonboard.org/2013/forcing-ifc6410-into-fastboot/. If you cannot use this method and still needs to reboot into fastboot mode, you can erase the boot partition on a running target using the following command @sudo cat /dev/zero > /dev/mmcblk0p7@
 * The developer image does not include the the Linaro Qualcomm overlay by default, unlike the Gnome image. If you need to install packages overlaid by Linaro, once you have booted the developer image, you need to create the file @/etc/apt/sources.list.d/linaro-maintainers-qcom-##UBUNTU_REL_NICK##.list@ with the following content:
@@ -281,8 +281,12 @@ deb-src http://ppa.launchpad.net/linaro-maintainers/qcom-overlay/ubuntu ##UBUNTU
 
 h4. Feedback and Support
 
-For general question or support request, please go to "My Dragon Board Community":http://mydragonboard.org/community/hw-sw-8064/.
+For general question or support request, please go to "mydragonboard.org":http://mydragonboard.org/community/hw-sw-8064/ Community.
 
 For any bug related to the Linaro Member Build, please submit issues to the "Linaro bug tracking system":https://bugs.linaro.org/. To submit a bug, select "File a Bug", then Product: "Qualcomm LT", or simply follow this "link":https://bugs.linaro.org/enter_bug.cgi?product=Qualcomm%20LT.
 
 Bugs will be reviewed and prioritized by the team. For any bug report it is recommended to provide as much information as possible, and at the very list please include the name of the release you are using, the output of @dpkg -l@ to list all packages installed, as well, as the boot log (output of @dmesg@).
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+__Qualcomm Snapdragon is product of Qualcomm Technologies, Inc.__