14.06: apply corrections from ARM

Signed-off-by: Ryan Harkin <ryan.harkin@linaro.org>

2 files changed, 7 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/android/images/armv8-android-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt b/android/images/armv8-android-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
index 9d062b6..57d05ae 100644
--- a/android/images/armv8-android-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
+++ b/android/images/armv8-android-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
@@ -20,12 +20,11 @@ LSK releases appear monthly. Sources are also made available so you can build yo
 
 h2. About the Linaro Android Release for ARMv8
 
-The Linaro Android release is based on Android AOSP master snapshot dated June 1st 2014, the release uses Linaro Linux LSK version 3.10 and is integrated with ARM Mali drivers for 3D graphics acceleration, the sources are built using Linaro GCC version 4.9. 
+The Linaro Android release is based on Android AOSP master snapshot dated June 1st 2014. The release uses Linaro Linux LSK version 3.10 and is integrated with ARM Mali drivers for 3D graphics acceleration. The sources are built using Linaro GCC version 4.9.
 
-The Android AOSP software provided in this release is thoroughly tested for CTS version 4.4, the CTS results are shared with members, the BIONIC component is validated with Android BIONIC tests, Android Monkey tests were run for stress testing, OpenGL 3D graphics rendering is validated manually to check for any UI artifacts, multi-lib (both 64bit and 32bit applications) were validated using examples provided in Android NDK. 
-
-The Linaro Android releases for Juno appear monthly. Sources are also made available so you can build your own images (see the "Building from Source tab":https://releases.linaro.org/14.06/android/images/armv8-android-juno-lsk/#tabs-5). 
+The Android AOSP software provided in this release is thoroughly tested for CTS version 4.4 and the CTS results are shared with members. The BIONIC component is validated with Android BIONIC tests. Android Monkey tests were run for stress testing. OpenGL 3D graphics rendering is validated manually to check for any UI artifacts. multi-lib (both 64bit and 32bit applications) were validated using examples provided in Android NDK.
 
+The Linaro Android releases for Juno appear monthly. Sources are also made available so you can build your own images (see the "Building from Source tab":https://releases.linaro.org/14.06/android/images/armv8-juice-juno-lsk/#tabs-5). 
 
 
 h2. Support
@@ -111,7 +110,7 @@ h4. Linux Kernel
 
 h2. Android AOSP Patch Summary
 
-The following list of patches developed by ARM and Linaro engineering teams were applied to Android AOSP dated June 1st 2014 to get Android booting to UI on ARMv8 Juno development platform. These patches can be found on Linaro's Android Git repositories. Few of these patches have been submitted to AOSP and being tracked for acceptance.
+The following list of patches developed by ARM and Linaro engineering teams were applied to Android AOSP dated June 1st 2014 to get Android booting to UI on the ARMv8 Juno development platform. These patches can be found on Linaro's Android Git repositories. Some of these patches have been submitted to AOSP and are being tracked for acceptance.
 
 * "build boot files and generate tarballs":https://android.git.linaro.org/gitweb/platform/build.git/commit/6a33bdf27388be96ed49b7eea4ee3f1ca90700e8
 * "set default runtime and zygote property in device config files":https://android.git.linaro.org/gitweb/platform/build.git/commit/2f9ad5ea5eb6ce50d17a600f1df3403bb1e7c60d
diff --git a/android/images/armv8-juice-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt b/android/images/armv8-juice-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
index fedeede..5bd5d6d 100644
--- a/android/images/armv8-juice-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
+++ b/android/images/armv8-juice-juno-lsk/HOWTO_releasenotes.txt
@@ -20,14 +20,13 @@ LSK releases appear monthly. Sources are also made available so you can build yo
 
 h2. About the Linaro Android Release for ARMv8
 
-The Linaro Android release is based on Android AOSP master snapshot dated June 1st 2014, the release uses Linaro Linux LSK version 3.10 and is integrated with ARM Mali drivers for 3D graphics acceleration, the sources are built using Linaro GCC version 4.9. 
+The Linaro Android release is based on Android AOSP master snapshot dated June 1st 2014. The release uses Linaro Linux LSK version 3.10 and is integrated with ARM Mali drivers for 3D graphics acceleration. The sources are built using Linaro GCC version 4.9.
 
-The Android AOSP software provided in this release is thoroughly tested for CTS version 4.4, the CTS results are shared with members, the BIONIC component is validated with Android BIONIC tests, Android Monkey tests were run for stress testing, OpenGL 3D graphics rendering is validated manually to check for any UI artifacts, multi-lib (both 64bit and 32bit applications) were validated using examples provided in Android NDK. 
+The Android AOSP software provided in this release is thoroughly tested for CTS version 4.4 and the CTS results are shared with members. The BIONIC component is validated with Android BIONIC tests. Android Monkey tests were run for stress testing. OpenGL 3D graphics rendering is validated manually to check for any UI artifacts. multi-lib (both 64bit and 32bit applications) were validated using examples provided in Android NDK.
 
 The Linaro Android releases for Juno appear monthly. Sources are also made available so you can build your own images (see the "Building from Source tab":https://releases.linaro.org/14.06/android/images/armv8-juice-juno-lsk/#tabs-5). 
 
 
-
 h2. Support
 
 Please send any support enquiries to "juno-support@arm.com":mailto:juno-support@arm.com?subject=Juno%20support%20request
@@ -111,7 +110,7 @@ h4. Linux Kernel
 
 h2. Android AOSP Patch Summary
 
-The following list of patches developed by ARM and Linaro engineering teams were applied to Android AOSP dated June 1st 2014 to get Android booting to UI on ARMv8 Juno development platform. These patches can be found on Linaro's Android Git repositories. Few of these patches have been submitted to AOSP and being tracked for acceptance.
+The following list of patches developed by ARM and Linaro engineering teams were applied to Android AOSP dated June 1st 2014 to get Android booting to UI on the ARMv8 Juno development platform. These patches can be found on Linaro's Android Git repositories. Some of these patches have been submitted to AOSP and are being tracked for acceptance.
 
 * "build boot files and generate tarballs":https://android.git.linaro.org/gitweb/platform/build.git/commit/6a33bdf27388be96ed49b7eea4ee3f1ca90700e8
 * "set default runtime and zygote property in device config files":https://android.git.linaro.org/gitweb/platform/build.git/commit/2f9ad5ea5eb6ce50d17a600f1df3403bb1e7c60d